However, others complain that the active voice attaches [sic] "excessive importance to the capacities of a single individual to effect change" (according to a Princeton University pamphlet), and that it champions self-interest over the broader interests of one's community as a whole. New York media critic Josh Ozersky offers as an example of "distasteful" usage the sentence "I do not see this as a sexist text." A more "enlightened" version would be: "It is seen as a sexist text, by some."
An Inclusive Litany
9/6/93
Use of the passive voice has been attacked [sic], not just because
it so often lacks clarity, but because it permits oppressors to hide
behind their acts. For example, linguist Julia Penelope Stanley
contends that the sentence "Mary was abused as a child" obscures the
fact that she was abused by her father. In his essay "Racist
Stereotyping in the English Language," Robert Moore points out that
the sentence "slaves were brought to America" obscures the
role of slave merchants and the consequential destruction of African
families and culture. Likewise, the sentence "the continental
railroad was built" fails to mention the role of Chinese
laborers or the oppression they, too, suffered.